tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post1837594332374002788..comments2023-07-27T10:38:36.186-04:00Comments on Brief Poems: Brianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06289013669698459078noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-73557501467362157522007-10-22T08:19:00.000-04:002007-10-22T08:19:00.000-04:00even in the muck... we could be just a kiss away f...even in the muck... we could be just a kiss away from greatness......paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-1121966075206898142007-10-21T11:23:00.000-04:002007-10-21T11:23:00.000-04:00Oh, I like this. Great take on the prompt. So much...Oh, I like this. Great take on the prompt. So much in so few words.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-20532838030665280402007-10-21T10:14:00.000-04:002007-10-21T10:14:00.000-04:00remi - I think perhaps you have confused me with a...remi - I think perhaps you have confused me with another Brian. ;)Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06289013669698459078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-7857871488284256742007-10-21T08:46:00.000-04:002007-10-21T08:46:00.000-04:00Brian,I thought you were in Europe?Too often the k...Brian,<BR/>I thought you were in Europe?<BR/><BR/>Too often the king of Toads has ruled our world.<BR/>Surrounded by all his mushrooming toadies they raised the muck level to higher and higher level...no wonder she croaked. ;)<BR/>relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-54836274438464779602007-10-21T00:55:00.000-04:002007-10-21T00:55:00.000-04:00gautami - I had never thought of the possibility o...gautami - I had never thought of the possibility of a good muck. the word doesn't represent goodness very well :)<BR/><BR/>paris - yeah i wasn't really sure that it fit the prompt, but the prompt is what sparked me to write it.<BR/><BR/>awareness - i think it's great that you got bubbling out of that... that word was in the original unedited poem, but was taken out because I didn't like how the word sounded, although I liked the image. good to know its still resides in the poem somewhere<BR/><BR/>tumblewords - yeah a little weird I guess, huh?Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06289013669698459078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-37667847514129147582007-10-21T00:19:00.000-04:002007-10-21T00:19:00.000-04:00Grieving mushrooms. I never thought about that, no...Grieving mushrooms. I never thought about that, not for a minute, never before. Nice!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-25607060403837573332007-10-20T17:40:00.000-04:002007-10-20T17:40:00.000-04:00big bubbling ribbit.......big bubbling ribbit.......awarenesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06098432781380754899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-78797910487459500232007-10-20T14:02:00.000-04:002007-10-20T14:02:00.000-04:00That's an interesting take on the prompt - rather ...That's an interesting take on the prompt - rather sad, but with a glimmer of hope?paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-36168210286599073572007-10-20T06:34:00.000-04:002007-10-20T06:34:00.000-04:00I hope it is a good muck!I hope it is a good muck!gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.com