tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post2561764550264331914..comments2023-07-27T10:38:36.186-04:00Comments on Brief Poems: Brianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06289013669698459078noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-8447756153876395832008-02-14T19:55:00.000-05:002008-02-14T19:55:00.000-05:00#2 is my choice (minus the "s" in L3 "girls" ?)Aga...#2 is my choice (minus the "s" in L3 "girls" ?)<BR/>Again, you use an economy of words to say much, and the images are keen.<BR/>So good to see you've returned. Missed you, Brian..:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-79555018783986310602008-02-10T16:05:00.000-05:002008-02-10T16:05:00.000-05:00Sharp... and an interesting writing style... Will ...Sharp... and an interesting writing style... Will revisit to read in more detailAnubhavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14639598985398959151noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-45232590740791532492008-02-08T16:19:00.000-05:002008-02-08T16:19:00.000-05:00Captures that moment perfectly. I just hope the in...Captures that moment perfectly. I just hope the incident described is not the reason why you have been absent for so long....(not that I'm prying or anything).<BR/><BR/>#2 is indeed sharper. How about 'muddied' instead of 'muddled'?<BR/><BR/>ArioAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-91314810361108809622008-02-07T15:49:00.000-05:002008-02-07T15:49:00.000-05:00Yup, #2... good stuffBummer about the little accid...Yup, #2... good stuff<BR/>Bummer about the little accident, thoughozymandiazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07891897071966903895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-25626064186860608992008-02-07T11:31:00.000-05:002008-02-07T11:31:00.000-05:00Hi Brian, nice to read you again. Hope all is well...Hi Brian, nice to read you again. Hope all is well. I definitely like the edit better, great imagery as usual. Take care,<BR/><BR/>Bobrchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-4883319446871336022008-02-07T09:12:00.000-05:002008-02-07T09:12:00.000-05:00L1 and L2 are a brilliant image.L1 and L2 are a brilliant image.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-85383276619104439942008-02-07T08:48:00.000-05:002008-02-07T08:48:00.000-05:00i mean wonderful. and tangible. sorry.i mean wonderful. and tangible. sorry.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2008023414691836972.post-82591782509129689662008-02-07T08:47:00.000-05:002008-02-07T08:47:00.000-05:00ouch!!! first stanza is wonderfu. tangiblke, cle...ouch!!! first stanza is wonderfu. tangiblke, clear, and simple.<BR/><BR/>glad you're back.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com