Saturday, May 26, 2007

Poetry Thursday

The seams
of the river
flow
so
effortlessly
around
my
intrusion.

It must know I'm here.

4 comments:

twitches said...

Very nice. The idea of the human as intruder, and the "knowing" of the river giving both a connection to each other, albeit a contentious one.

Crafty Green Poet said...

this is quietly thought provoking. I'll think about this next time I'm walking by the river.

gautami tripathy said...

This is a very interesting thought.

sister AE said...

This is smooth! and clever too. Nice.