Tuesday, July 24, 2007

While taking calls on his cell phone,
the ice cream truck man
calls to children with his song.

8 comments:

ozymandiaz said...

hope he don't run any over.

paris parfait said...

That's certainly a comment on our society these days - cell phones everywhere! (And hopefully he's not driving the truck while talking on his cell phone). :)

Constance said...

Two different kinds of communication, cool!

paisley said...

how gracefully you interjected the present into a fleeting memory of my past... very well done....

tumblewords said...

Ring tones. What a cool take on current times.

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Clare said...

I like all the "c's" in your poem, and also the old fashioned mixed with modern technology. Really cool poem!
:)

Brian said...

Paris - yes, unforunately, he was driving.

Clare - I hadn't realized the use of c so much, maybe because the sounds are hard soft and "ch". good catch!