A collection of short poems
hope he don't run any over.
That's certainly a comment on our society these days - cell phones everywhere! (And hopefully he's not driving the truck while talking on his cell phone). :)
Two different kinds of communication, cool!
how gracefully you interjected the present into a fleeting memory of my past... very well done....
Ring tones. What a cool take on current times.
I like all the "c's" in your poem, and also the old fashioned mixed with modern technology. Really cool poem!:)
Paris - yes, unforunately, he was driving.Clare - I hadn't realized the use of c so much, maybe because the sounds are hard soft and "ch". good catch!
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hope he don't run any over.
That's certainly a comment on our society these days - cell phones everywhere! (And hopefully he's not driving the truck while talking on his cell phone). :)
Two different kinds of communication, cool!
how gracefully you interjected the present into a fleeting memory of my past... very well done....
Ring tones. What a cool take on current times.
I like all the "c's" in your poem, and also the old fashioned mixed with modern technology. Really cool poem!
:)
Paris - yes, unforunately, he was driving.
Clare - I hadn't realized the use of c so much, maybe because the sounds are hard soft and "ch". good catch!
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