Monday, October 29, 2007

Above my head,
a fly spirals

towards a piece
of watermelon

gushing juice
upon my chin


janetleigh said...

I love kamikazee fly bys with chin fuel-ups!

Ario said...

The thing about these brief poems is that they remind me of that William Carlos Williams poem This Is Just To Say. This one is also nice and sharp with the two different movements spirals and gushing.

Brian said...

Yeah I am familiar with some of his work. He does have some very nice shorter poems. There's that other that starts "So much depends upon"