Thursday, October 18, 2007

A tiny drum carries
the rhythm of worry.

I listen to the sounds
of fingers
as they roll
across her belly.

6 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

I like the sensuous image created by it.

Jo said...

Gautami is bang on (pun intended (GRIN)).

tumblewords said...

Oh, yes! It works!

paisley said...

very nice.. i am envious of your ability to use so few words,, and say so much.......

Brian said...

thanks paisley. Reduction is mostly in the editing I think.

sbpoet said...

A deep picture; so few words.

& you are right about editing, I think.