Wednesday, October 10, 2007

The pantry is emptying
itself into the kitchen.
I watch as my
stale-bread of hands
crumble to the floor.


jillypoet said...

Oh man! I don't know where to start. Your brief poems are chock full of clear, concise images & dead-on language. Great words. Each small poem is like a photograph. I read down the front of your blog, and each individual poem there, when read all together, read like one long free-association piece. Wow!

Brian said...

thanks jillypoet. i find the small "photograph" poems to be quite practical for online poetry blogging. (especially where peopel's attention span can be short) i'd never thought of reading them as one stream of thought...