Tuesday, October 9, 2007

Seawater rises and falls
as a crusty line of salt
moves up and down her calf.

13 comments:

writerwoman said...

This one is sexy! Brings a smile to my face.

wendy said...

Yeah, this one is very good.
needs nothing more.

...deb said...

Beautifully styled, the last line is perfect.

gautami tripathy said...

To the point!

sister AE said...

excellent!

tumblewords said...

Perfect! Visual, sensual.

Mike Mc said...

Very well done. Plenty of spaces for my imagination to fill in.

LJCohen said...

Ahhhh. Lovely.

:)

Rethabile said...

Very... sensual, yes. Well done.

Jo said...

I love this, it's just about perfect.

Crafty Green Poet said...

I like this one too! It made me smile

Clare said...

Unexpected and lovely ending! And the feeling of movement in this is really nice.
:)

ish said...

Less-is-more. This one's a treat.