Brief Poems

Tuesday, October 9, 2007

Seawater rises and falls
as a crusty line of salt
moves up and down her calf.

writerwoman said...: This one is sexy! Brings a smile to my face.; October 10, 2007 at 1:56 PM
wendy said...: Yeah, this one is very good.
needs nothing more.; October 11, 2007 at 8:45 PM
Deb said...: Beautifully styled, the last line is perfect.; October 11, 2007 at 8:47 PM
gautami tripathy said...: To the point!; October 11, 2007 at 9:19 PM
sister AE said...: excellent!; October 11, 2007 at 9:43 PM
Tumblewords: said...: Perfect! Visual, sensual.; October 11, 2007 at 10:22 PM
Anonymous said...: Very well done. Plenty of spaces for my imagination to fill in.; October 11, 2007 at 10:44 PM
Lisa Cohen said...: Ahhhh. Lovely.

:); October 11, 2007 at 10:50 PM
Rethabile said...: Very... sensual, yes. Well done.; October 12, 2007 at 4:29 AM
Jo said...: I love this, it's just about perfect.; October 12, 2007 at 7:54 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: I like this one too! It made me smile; October 12, 2007 at 1:58 PM
Clare said...: Unexpected and lovely ending! And the feeling of movement in this is really nice.
:); October 13, 2007 at 6:13 PM
Steve Isham said...: Less-is-more. This one's a treat.; October 13, 2007 at 10:21 PM