Wednesday, November 21, 2007

She plays hopscotch
over her sorrow.

5 comments:

Ario said...

Nicely captured.

My lover does that too.

janetleigh said...

Good one, Brian..:) This one I felt immediately. I'm known for saying things like "let's just build a ramp over this shitty weekend" or "a bridge over your first thought to what you just said is a drawbridge your car just fell through." Heh.

S. Thomas Summers said...

quite nice. crisp...always tight. fresh image.

Anna said...

Exactly. Perfect.

writerwoman said...

This one is excellent. Heartbreakingly poignant.