Wednesday, November 21, 2007

She plays hopscotch
over her sorrow.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nicely captured.

My lover does that too.

Anonymous said...

Good one, Brian..:) This one I felt immediately. I'm known for saying things like "let's just build a ramp over this shitty weekend" or "a bridge over your first thought to what you just said is a drawbridge your car just fell through." Heh.

Anonymous said...

quite nice. crisp...always tight. fresh image.

Anna said...

Exactly. Perfect.

writerwoman said...

This one is excellent. Heartbreakingly poignant.

Esther said...

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