in the pale
crisp fountain
made of marble
and brick
a yellow bird
is getting lost
in the snow
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3 comments:
always tight and crisp. i challenge you to bring me more than an observation. bless your poem witha second level. just an idea.
Very succinct image comes to mind; bright yellow against a gray and white background. Elegant in its simplicity..:)
p.s. Glad to see you back; you must be feeling better..?
Janet - yes I am back and am recovering well!
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