Monday, March 24, 2008

I miss you

In a whisper
you went out
and never
lit again.

4 comments:

janetleigh said...

I like how you led me in one direction, then surprised the ending..:)

Jade said...

a breath - luv.

Jade said...

a breath - luv.

Fireblossom said...

I love brevity. I'm gonna add you to my links. Try and stop me.

I can almost smell the smoke of the extinguished flame in this one.