Thursday, March 13, 2008

She wished to be broken
into pieces
like a magnet,

so that each piece of her
I would love
like the whole.

10 comments:

writerwoman said...

I love the depth to this in such a short poem. It speaks to how we all want to be cherished for all the parts of us. Very universal feelinsgs but expressed within your work in a way only you would think of.

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Poetman said...

...Nice...

Paul said...

what remains
of her
is to be loved.

Jade said...

beautiful ... so real for me.

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Fireblossom said...

A woman of parts, no doubt.

See how we refract

even when we are not

quite

intact

writerwoman said...

I linked to your poem today from PWB.

Pam said...

Did you use the image of a magnet to allude to attraction? I find this poem very interesting and thought-provoking. I'm here from PWB

paisley said...

wow is that nice... what an amazing piece of thought packed into so few words.. love like a magnet.. wow... i love this....

Scot said...

liked the ending--good one