She wished to be broken
into pieces
like a magnet,
so that each piece of her
I would love
like the whole.
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10 comments:
I love the depth to this in such a short poem. It speaks to how we all want to be cherished for all the parts of us. Very universal feelinsgs but expressed within your work in a way only you would think of.
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...Nice...
what remains
of her
is to be loved.
beautiful ... so real for me.
please visit my blog and write.
A woman of parts, no doubt.
See how we refract
even when we are not
quite
intact
I linked to your poem today from PWB.
Did you use the image of a magnet to allude to attraction? I find this poem very interesting and thought-provoking. I'm here from PWB
wow is that nice... what an amazing piece of thought packed into so few words.. love like a magnet.. wow... i love this....
liked the ending--good one
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