Friday, August 29, 2008

She sleeps
with her eyes
wide open
because she fears
I'll leave.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Once again you packed a novel into a few lines and it leaves me stunned. As a fiction writer this poem makes me see a whole long story of their relationship. Bravo!

Anonymous said...

You are very talented. Your poems may be really short but they carry so much meaning!

I love reading them...