Sunday, December 21, 2008

Dishes break themselves
on the kitchen floor.
Cupboard-doors slam
against the woodwork.

I watch as a woman
(who for so long
has been invisible)
tries to make herself known.

8 comments:

Awais said...

I just discovered your blog, and i loved reading your poems! Awesome!

Freddie said...

Unique use of words and expressions... loving it all.

Poetmeister said...

Me, too! :)

Mandy said...

I really enjoyed this one.

writerwoman said...

I like the first version of the poem (if it is indeed two versions).


I watch as a woman
(who for so long
has been invisible)
tries to make herself known.

That is fantastic!

The Scarecrow said...

Lovely!

Susannah said...

Excellent - I love your writing.

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