Sunday, January 11, 2009

Sips of gas-stop's finest
on endless roads.

I drive with the sludge
on my mind.

2 comments:

Mariah said...

the last two lines are epic. :)

writerwoman said...

Love the last few lines. They really paint a picture. Its almost like they create a scene from a movie in the mind...the man driving through the desert at sundown, smoking a cigrette, at his breaking point.