Saturday, July 28, 2007


In any day with you,
hidden in warmth,
is the sun not rising
but approaching.


astrobassist said...

WOW. The last three lines is what it's all about! Nicely done. I don't like 'hidden in warmth,' though: what does it mean?

Brian said...

Not sure how well I've pulled this one off. It for sure could use a rewrite. I think somewhere in there is the tension between being warmed and burned by someone, and not really being able to tell the difference.