Wednesday, November 14, 2007

Monotony

Pills in the morning
and then again
in the evening.

This thing,
it never ends.

5 comments:

S. Thomas Summers said...

Try popping your poetry...nice tight little pills....only positive side effects. Hope all is well.

Scott

writerwoman said...

The weight of this one is intense. It creaks like old bones, and reminds me of how precious time is.

ozymandiaz said...

Depends on the pills your popping...

writerwoman said...

Seriously, you are rapidly becoming one of my favorite poets online.

I love the way you boil a whole life or sitution into a few words.

Brian said...

Thanks Sara.

I am also a big fan of your poetry. It is very original. You have developed some intense craft skills that I can definitely learn from. I especially love the way your poems are paced. They also seem to always be rooted in feeling, which allows your readers to connect.