Friday, April 25, 2008

Companion

She ratchets
imaginary love
back into existence
and drags it
to bed,
screaming
of the mechanical
unfleshing

1 comment:

janetleigh said...

That's an interesting way of saying contrived feelings are brought to bed and impact any activity therein. There's disappointment and resentment embedded within the feelings, too. I felt so much with so few words. You definitely excel at brief poems, Brian..:)