A collection of short poems
I love this very succinct, very vivid description. The various layers in the "sky detaches"; the literal illusory sight of a patch of sky seen through tears, and, the metaphor for the collapse of dreams. Brief and perfect.http://owlnights.blogspot.com/
Oh wow, this is intense.
What wordcrafter said. It's amazing to me how you "see" things, Brian. Everything you write is so vivid in meaning using an economy of words. I think this is one of your best, truly. Hope you're doing well..:)p.s. I really appreciate that you've changed your "Comment page" set-up. It's so easy for me now. Thanks so much and I hope it wasn't a hassle to do.
feelin like chickin little?
Hi, I have a new poetry site and was wondering if you would like to exchange links.I have added your link here:Online Poetry BlogsAnd my site is:Poem Poem PoemI have also created a blog where you can register and publish your own poems and stories. I would love to have your contributions if you are so inclined. The blog isPoems and StoriesThanks and I hope to see you there. - Anna
I love the second stanza. This happened to me, actually, only the poster was john coltrane.
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