A telephone cord gives CPR to the nearly dying.
A mirror watches a young girl starve to death.
Shrapnel eradicates hunger in Iraq.
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8 comments:
Interesting!
A mirror watches a young girl starve to death.
That one really speaks to me. It paints a picture that haunts.
perhaps shorten the lines a bit. take advantage of enjambment opportunities. enjoyed,
I think it is fantastic. The last line hits hard.
wondeful capture
Interesting word/image associations!
"Shrapnel eradicates hunger in Iraq."
well, the dead don't eat...
I don't get the first line, but the rest is definitely haunting.
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